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cuetbruin
12-31-2004, 09:11 PM
I’m delirious about how mysterious it seems to be. A black man on the street corner, playing the horn to the beat that only he knows, flowing from the pit of his soul to the soles of your feet. Not because he’s afraid to look up, but because he’s sick of seeing hate.
I’m serious about how ridiculous it seems to be. A black man in white society. Everybody wants to be you, but no one wants to see you. Shouting loudly I’m Black and I’m Proud! Through the way that you walk, to the way that you talk; from the poetry that you project from your soul, to the words that flow from your heart—Wait; it isn’t poetry, it’s floetry.
Speaking the history of the misery that you’ve seen with your own eyes, touched with your own hands, and experienced through your own life. Telling the tales of police brutality and the time that you spent the night in jail because you lost your car keys and the police thought you were the man six feet tall, dark, and—sssh! But, I’m only talking about!!
When will it end?
The sad tune protruding from the horn?
The sorrowful tales of the Black Man’s norm?
The hypocrisy of a society based upon the misery of a people,
Of a culture,
Of it’s equal?

Never mind
I don’t want to stress the waters that white jesus walked on—oops!
Too late, because Peter just fell in. . .

MAgicman83
01-01-2005, 07:33 PM
real good best one i heard all day

cuetbruin
01-01-2005, 11:36 PM
Thanks

mr_magoo
01-06-2005, 09:43 PM
good one

diggler551
01-07-2005, 12:05 AM
Tight poem

Loves Requiem
01-09-2005, 07:32 AM
I wanted to say, I've loved what I've read so far, which is saying a lot since I don't like a lot of poetry (sometimes not even my own). I think you do a wonderful job of describing black men and street life. Definitly not the same old same poetry, each piece has its unique color.

corbra2145
02-15-2005, 11:51 PM
that was powerful keep it up

king76
02-20-2005, 02:51 PM
one of the best i readt thks

pussyologist_1914
03-04-2005, 08:04 PM
:cool: yeah i like this one. i read it out load to see, hear, and feel it and its nice. do your thing fam cause no one else will. ;)

mrblade
03-05-2005, 07:06 PM
Feeling it, thanks

mrseanj10
03-07-2005, 07:40 AM
That was on point