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da~wizard
12-31-2004, 07:26 PM
Where is This Place?

Where is this place for me? I search and I search,
longing to find the place where I fit in, yet, it eludes me.
I am like a small child chasing a butterfy. Each
time I get close, it flies away. I am like a puzzle.
Not the whole puzzle or the picture the puzzle represents,
but that missing piece which makes the puzzle incomplete.
I try. Oh how I try to fit in, but I cannot. Maybe
it's because I am like no one or no one is like
me. I bore so easily. I do not find interest in
the things that interest others, but I try. These
things seem so unimportant and trivial to me. I am
in search of a greater cause, a higher sense of
self worth. People become content with just having
material possessions. Material possessions mean
nothing to me. They are like trinkets or toys, one
has as a child. At first they are fascinating and fun,
then they lose their appeal. They become ordinary
things strewn into a toy box among the other ordinary
things that were once also, objects of affection, must-
haves. I am like those toys in the toy box, hoping,
wishing to catch someone's eye, so once again I will
be held in high regard. Once again, I will be the object
of someone's affection, until I lose my grandeur all over
again and am thrown into another toybox to repeat
the cycle all over. Where is this place for me?

Dawizard 12/5/01

cuetbruin
12-31-2004, 09:09 PM
it is well written, but lacks rhythm and substance.

MAgicman83
01-01-2005, 07:34 PM
i disagree itz excellent

cuetbruin
01-02-2005, 08:09 PM
You are right, I am wrong. After rereading it I realize that it is excellent. Good job!

da~wizard
01-03-2005, 04:08 PM
Thank you! I accept all criticism
be it constructive or no.

ScandilousP
01-04-2005, 01:44 PM
very nice ma man....

da~wizard
01-04-2005, 06:48 PM
Hey thanks Kng and SP.
I really appreciate that homies.

Loves Requiem
01-09-2005, 05:47 AM
Cool...It has a more prose pattern, or blank verse.

It reminds of a mismatched sock or key or a puzzle piece left forgotten in relation to one's self looking for one's purpose in the picture of life....

I know, no one asked me, but I felt like pointing it out.

nolia79
01-09-2005, 12:01 PM
Insightful bruh
I like the fact that everyone doesn't try to sound like
each other..
all of your own - Welcome home -Post on

da~wizard
01-10-2005, 01:14 PM
Originally posted by Fallen Angel
Cool...It has a more prose pattern, or blank verse. *

It reminds of a mismatched sock or key or a puzzle piece left forgotten in relation to one's self looking for one's purpose in the picture of life....

I know, no one asked me, but I felt like pointing it out.

Thanks BAK or should I say FAllen now?
Yeah I kinda felt like that when I wrote it.
Incomplete like.
Good insight.

da~wizard
01-10-2005, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by nolia79
Insightful bruh
I like the fact that everyone doesn't try to sound like
each other..
all of your own - Welcome home -Post on

Thanks cuz.
Welcome back Nolia.

drearg
01-10-2005, 04:10 PM
You seem to have put some real thought into it. It makes me think of the real purpose in life. Not trying to be like anyone else, or to fit in, just being happy with yourself.

Burd
01-10-2005, 05:18 PM
damn reading that made me think of this girl i knew in high school but, good job.

da~wizard
02-06-2005, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by drearg
You seem to have put some real thought into it. *It makes me think of the real purpose in life. *Not trying to be like anyone else, or to fit in, just being happy with yourself.

Without that I would go insane.
Good insight and thanks for reading Burd.