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cuetbruin
01-02-2005, 04:10 PM
Cool Harlem nights
Filled with sounds of those searching
Lonely street corners
Antiquated warehouses abandoned
Closed storefronts opened.
Street lamps
Casting shadows upon faces
Emboldened
Enraged
Tired
Silent winds
Chanting the songs of the brave
Hearts
Souls
Men
Summer’s breeze
Carrying the spirit of
Change
Revolution
End
ScandilousP
01-04-2005, 01:35 PM
That was really nice....
Keep it up!!!!
cuetbruin
01-04-2005, 05:20 PM
Thank you
da~wizard
01-04-2005, 06:49 PM
That one was pretty cool.
Good work.
fukdawrld
01-04-2005, 08:07 PM
most excellent
Tocar
01-04-2005, 08:22 PM
truly remarkable the way you used those words to paint the picture. Nice job
<--DeNY-->
01-04-2005, 11:19 PM
That was really cool. For me I the second verse really caught me. For some reason the image of a dude hustling on the corner late at night, sick of the grind popped into my head at the sound of those words.
cuetbruin
01-05-2005, 01:27 AM
Thank you all
mr_magoo
01-06-2005, 09:44 PM
good work...
MrDelmo
01-07-2005, 10:35 PM
hot man
pbshitan26
01-07-2005, 11:39 PM
thats right start a revolution
nolia79
01-09-2005, 04:09 AM
I can only echo whats already been said
You bring people in when you write like that
PostonPosta
babyboy
01-09-2005, 04:29 AM
:D :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :-?o :=p :) :eek: :eek: :=p
Loves Requiem
01-09-2005, 05:54 AM
Very well writen...good images, methapors, style and end.
hendu75
11-05-2007, 03:15 PM
deep.
twofayce
11-06-2007, 07:30 AM
love the poem man, true artistry right there.....
latoya3709
11-11-2007, 10:59 AM
Well, Well, Well done my friend.